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CHARLOTTE EAGLES


4/10

 

 

The Logo BreakDown- Charlotte Eagles

August 11, 2017

Coming off a fresh Championship win in the PDL, I'm reviewing the Charlotte Eagles. RATING: 4/10

Unlike Fresno Football Club, set to debut in the USL in 2018, the Charlotte Eagles have been around since 1991. Naturally the logo might seem outdated, seeing that it's been around for more than 20 years. Now I'm not saying all logos created years ago aren't good; what I'm saying is, an effective logo should work well no matter what design era it's in.

RATING SYSTEM

ORIGINALITY 4
CREATIVITY 1
COLOR SCHEME 4
OVERALL 4/10

We must take a different approach while reviewing this logo. If we were to compare it to the minimalist approach a lot of logos are taking right now, they'd be polar opposites. Remember, this logo was created over 25 years ago when design was at a transitional stage.


February 1990, Photoshop Version 1.0 is born; graphic design forever changes. Unlike today, Photoshop was made available to everyone as opposed to specialists. So in the 90's we see a wide variety of design, ranging from the start of grunge to the use of simple geometric shapes. Take for instance the Carolina Dynamo (also a PDL club) founded in 1993 has a very simple flat and completely different type of logo for soccer(someone let them know they need to re-brand).

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And of course we have the 1994 World Cup USA logo; done in a very similar fashion. Simple shapes, kind of like people were just starting to learn how to use this program. As time went on, more and more updates were being made to Photoshop. Graphic design was constantly changing, new abilities meant endless possibilities.

The introduction of layers in Photoshop, skyrocketed the design world and began introducing more detailed logos. A clear example of this would be Rochester Rhinos of the United Soccer League. Created in 1996, the Rochester Rhinos logo progression shows how the evolution of design has changed in soccer logos. Having re-branded recently when new owners David and Wendy Dworkin took over, the 90's logo has been abandoned and they are now using a great looking rhino logo. However, in all honesty, the secondary logo is much better than the primary.

Now that we have an sense of the design world in the 90's, we can see that many designers were just doing what was popular at the time as well as learning a new program along the way. The only problem is, their execution wasn't quite on. Being that the team is part of a the MAI organization, an organization that shares the message of Christianity through soccer, I just am really annoyed with the orange cross in the middle of the logo. In a typical cross the horizontal line is shorter than the vertical line; but here we have yet again, a generic soccer ball covering up the bottom of the cross.

Here's what I think each element means.

Here's what I think each element means.

Rather than the shape resembling a cross symbolizing their Christianity, it looks more like a plus sign or a perfect four-quadrant breakup in the shield. It's important to include the cross, I feel it is more important to the team organization than the eagle aspect, I just need a little bit more creativity and distinction to reflect an actual cross. To be honest, I don't think the eagle is needed. In fact, I would rather it be removed from the logo, though still keep the name. Similar to the soccer ball approach, if you can't make it creative and something different, it's best to just leave it out. The lines in the background I'm assuming are globe or world map lines set to represent world ministry. Those too, I would just get rid of them and focus more on the other parts of the logo.

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The two stars can go too...

The two stars can go too, which represent the championships won when they were in the professional league. Since they are now in the PDL those stars are irrelevant, but they can include one star for their recent championship win.

I think if we removed the orange outline on the word EAGLES, it would stand out a bit more. I'm not the biggest fan of using two unique but similar fonts together, unless the design called for it. In this sense, I would make CHARLOTTE a simple sans-serif font, and then make EAGLES a unique font.

Charlotte Eagles Color Scheme

Charlotte's color scheme is one that I can't think of another team in the PDL has right now. Blue and orange are two of my favorite colors, and with the right shades combined together, you can get a really nice palette going. Though the random orange lightning bolt in the eagle's wing has to go. I'm not sure if that's supposed to resemble feathers or some type of eagle wing feature that I'm unaware of, or the most logical explanation, it was struck by he-who-must-not-be-named.

Joking. Anyways, since this logo was done very in tune with the design world at the time. I figured why not tackle this logo in a minimalist way. What's minimalist? A perfect example is Juventus. You know, the logo that pissed off everyone. But I have to agree, this was TOO SIMPLE and got rid of a very important part of Juventus club history, the badge.

Juventus Logo Comparison.jpg

officially adopted into use in July 2017

So I wanted to take a crack at this minimalist era that we are in and reboot the Charlotte Eagles.
Check it out below and let me know what you think!

As I mentioned earlier, I got rid of the generic ball and the unimportant eagle. I stripped this logo down to the main point, a championship team that has Christian values in it's foundation.  I eliminated the use of black, and lightened the blue an…

As I mentioned earlier, I got rid of the generic ball and the unimportant eagle. I stripped this logo down to the main point, a championship team that has Christian values in it's foundation. I eliminated the use of black, and lightened the blue and orange shades slightly.


By simplifying the Charlotte Eagles to just CE, we can now use it as a monogram, another way to expand on the brand.

By simplifying the Charlotte Eagles to just CE, we can now use it as a monogram, another way to expand on the brand.

BOOM.

BOOM.

See the full branding here

Overall, this logo OK for an amateur team, that most likely has a very small staff and can't afford to pay thousands for a re-brand. Though with the USL launching a D3 league, Charlotte Eagles should take advantage and re-brand, especially after winning the championship. It could show that they are ready to return to professional soccer.

RATING SYSTEM
ORIGINALITY 4
CREATIVITY 1
COLOR SCHEME 4
OVERALL 4/10

Make sure you follow me on twitter/instagram for new posts! @designbyalva or click the link at the bottom!
Next week I'll be looking at some more PDL, USL and MLS teams, be on a lookout for it!


Want to know how I rate these logos? Here's a little breakdown:
  • Originality- What makes the logo its own? Does it stand out among the rest, or blend in? They tried, but the use of a generic soccer ball and creative-lacking eagle brings the originality down.
  • Creativity- Is there that special thing that makes it stand out? What sets it apart from the others in a special way? The symbol that should have been capitalized on but was poorly executed was the cross.
  • Color Scheme- I'm looking for 1-3 colors, maybe four, at the very most five, if they're used well.

Agree? Don't agree? Leave a reply!

In The Logo BreakDown Tags review, logo, mls, blog, design, soccer, website, squarespace, 2016, logodesign, sports, brand, designer, branding, graphic design, expansion, graphicdesign, graphicdesigner, United Soccer League, USL, Fresno, Fresno Football Club, Charlotte, Charlotte Eagles, PDL, Premier Development League, Photoshop, USA, World Cup, Carolina, Carolina Dynamo, Rochester, Rochester Rhinos, Juventus, Minimalism, Minimalist
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FRESNO FC


2/10

 

 

The Logo BreakDown- Fresno Football Club

August 9, 2017

Next up, Fresno Football Club, new expansion team announced for the USL 2018 season. RATING: 2/10

My initial reaction was, “Dear God-no-why?”, but I took a deep breath and decided I needed get some more info. Now before making a proper assessment, I wanted to gather some insight as to how this logo was developed and/or if there is a brand narrative out there.

RATING SYSTEM

ORIGINALITY 2
CREATIVITY 2
COLOR SCHEME 2
OVERALL 2/10

Fresno Football Club was introduced about two weeks ago on July 26, as one of three teams starting the 2018 season with the United Soccer League. When I went to their website, I didn’t find anything in terms of branding, so I went to the USL’s website to find the press release; all that is mentioned is that the colors and elements are inspired from the city, the usual generic description. One reference that was made is that Fresno means ash tree in Spanish, though I’m not sure what the colors represent... this is why BRANDING is so important. How come there isn’t any info out there about the teams identity?

Determined to figure out this logo debacle, I went to the most trusted news source there is, Twitter. Boom, right away I found a thread regarding “elements that are unique to Fresno’s identity”. You can check that thread out below or view on Twitter.

So apparently the elements are literally just random elements with no meaning behind them. The only element that is “symbolic” to the city is the ash leaf, nothing else. Then I saw a tweet from @KingKMPH sports anchor/reporter for @KMPHFOX26, “How the new @FresnoFC2018 logo represents Fresno: crop lines for ag...then, like the city flag: ash tree leaf, a sun + light blue coloring.” So apparently the news knows more about the logo than the team. Interesting...

So while they figure out what their logo means, let’s begin to break it down. If you missed Monday’s post, I introduced color as being one of the most important aspects of a logo. The reason behind having 1-3 colors is mainly so the logo translates seamlessly no matter what type of application. Meaning, no matter how the logo is being used, it works without having to lose brand recognition. Keeping your brand consistent in all mediums helps your target audience make the connection as they see it more. Back to the colors, besides the gold gradient, we have about four different shades of blue; sky blue, navy blue, royal blue and then the initials “am” are in another different shade of blue.

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Going off what King said; the gold is the sun. Which only shines on Fresno and that’s why it’s such an important element, obviously(please note that this is sarcasm). It’s a stretch but sure, let’s go with that. Now the light blue and dark blue colors, that I thought were sun rays, actually represent agriculture. Since gold represents the sun, it just seemed like that was the logical explanation. Usually agriculture is shown with green, but maybe there’s another reason for their color scheme. I do hope we get a brand narrative that goes into detail at some point in the future. As well as an explanation as to why they didn't follow the brand colors of Fresno Fuego FC of the PDL. It would have been much easier to build off a brand that has been around since 2002.

Here's my visual breakdown..

Here's my visual breakdown..

All right, now let’s get into these “design elements.” Most obvious one is the clip art generic soccer ball. I get it, there are so many soccer logos out there, how can we make it our own? Well if you can't, a simple solution is to remove the ball entirely. We already know you’re a soccer team, if it’s going to be generic, it’s best to just leave it out.

Besides the soccer ball, we have some light blue lines and some random gold elements. Can this logo be embroidered, without losing any quality or leaving out any elements? No, possibly a sewed on patch, but even if you make the logo extra big, its going to be hard to get all those elements in there. The letters EST 2018 are barely recognizable and the AM initials are gone.

Fresno - Hat Mockup.jpg

A great example of clean and clever design is Phoenix Rising FC, newly branded USL team that originally was Arizona United SC, features a custom soccer ball that evolves into a phoenix. Undoubtedly, one of my favorite logos. You can see a quick breakdown of PHX below.


In terms of hierarchy, the top element that is recognized first is the word FRESNO. A simple sans-serif font is used, not sure what the font family is, but we see many teams going with a clean font as their names. White against any dark background color will give you great contrast and attract the viewer's eye; for example, Phoenix is using white and a bright red text against a black shield, and Fresno is using white text against a blue shield.

Even though the city of Fresno’s website has no mentioning of ash trees in any of its history, it did note that Fresno County is ranked first in the nation for agricultural production with annual sales in excess of $3 billion-source. However, according to new General Manager Frank Yallop, Fresno means ash tree, that’s why an ash leaf is featured in the crest; my question is, why not expand on that? Why not take out all the unnecessary elements in the logo and focus on the ash leaf? As I mentioned in my last post, teams are trying to simplify their logos and set focus on what they want their team to portray. Again I go back to Phoenix Rising FC, they’ve eliminated all the extras and kept it simple with one clear element in the middle of the shield.

Since I began researching this logo and working on my breakdown, I began to wonder, how would I design Fresno's logo? I'm not sure who designed the logo, but I think I know what happened, this might be a case of the executive likes this, therefore this is what we are going with. Which if you haven't experienced yet as a designer, you might want to get used to it. I did manage to find out that the Director of Marketing is Jordan Wiebe, you can check out his twitter page here @jordanweeb. He's also the founder of an Arsenal support group, @FresnoGooners which features, and I hate to say it, a very clean Arsenal inspired logo. After seeing that, I sure hope he can steer Fresno in the right direction. If you want to take a look at more of his work, you can check out his Behance portfolio here.

After getting into this, I mocked up my own logo design. Below is what I came up with, basing my work off a minimalist approach like Phoenix Rising, I eliminated the sky blue and kept it to just 2 colors.

FresnoLogoComparison.jpg

I decided to remove the soccer ball, the agriculture lines, the gold elements, and the initials at the bottom. I understand the sentiment of the initials, but I would want to see that handled a different way rather than putting it on the logo. Being that Fresno means ash tree, I brought the ash leaf down, enlarged it and gave it a two tone. Which then led me to put the sun at the top of the crest and est 2018 at the bottom in bold, so it's a bit easier to read. But as I was creating this, I realized just how versatile this logo could be! Not only do we have various colors of shields but we can also remove the the leaf with the name and use it as a word mark. But even after that, there's more, you can use just the ash leaf as its own icon. Take a look below!

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Overall, this logo does not meet the standards of a professional team in my opinion. ANY new team joining the growing landscape of American soccer NEEDS to step up their game. Especially since any club owner/investor wants to make money, I would think they would spend some more time, more effort and money. In 2016, USL's franchise fees were around $10 million; you're going to tell me they can't afford to invest in a developing a brand that connects with their target audience?
It just doesn't make sense to me. Let's hope the newly announced Birmingham side can learn from Fresno's mistakes.

RATING SYSTEM
ORIGINALITY 2
CREATIVITY 2
COLOR SCHEME 2
OVERALL 2/10

Make sure you follow me on twitter for new posts! @designbyalva or click the link at the bottom!
Next up, the Charlotte Eagles of the PDL, who just beat out Thunder Bay Chill for the 2017 Championship last Saturday.
Be on a lookout for it!


Want to know how I rate these logos? Here's a cut and dry breakdown:
  • Originality- What makes the logo its own? Does it stand out among the rest, or blend in?- Typical soccer crest with no clear objective or sense of style.
  • Creativity- Is there that special thing that makes it stand out? What sets it apart from the others in a special way? I want to see something that hasn't been done before, or some type of special modification- Everything in the logo is something we have already seen before, there is nothing special about it.
  • Color Scheme- I'm looking for 1-3 colors, maybe four, at the very most five, if they're used well- This logo seems to go for the make it shiny crowd.

Agree? Don't agree? Leave a reply!

In The Logo BreakDown Tags review, logo, mls, blog, design, soccer, website, squarespace, 2016, logodesign, sports, brand, designer, branding, graphic design, expansion, graphicdesign, graphicdesigner, United Soccer League, USL, Fresno, Fresno Football Club
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